by qualitywheat
u r a great writer and you only need some proof reading and it would be perfectisimo!
more please!!!
I like the build up, and that the blackmail turned to something positive, instead of the woman suffering. They both benefit from the situation.
When he took her in the ass I got very hot, I felt an orgasm building, mmmmm.
I got lost sometimes, I wasn't sure who was speaking.
I would love to see this to develop into something with mother and daughter
I hopr there is more to this story. I can't wait. Very well done.
Thank you, qualitywheat. In my book this is an excellent story!