by au_Macbeth
Loving the story, very well written. But as others are saying, it is too short! I read the 5 chapters in 17 mins. Usually 1 chapter takes at least double that. Great potential though, so I will continue to read it, but the length effects the rating. If it was longer would be a 5.
its too short, but I have to say it strangely catched me on a hook. Next chapter please!!!