All Comments on 'Castaways Ch. 04'

Good but why did you have to make Em into a whiny emo chick?

Good chapter. Although Em was a little annoying, I still enjoyed reading.

Loved this chapter (ending?) Very descriptive and well written

I know something is good when I skip through the sex to get to the story...

Just found this story and I loved it!

"Em, this isn't real! I'm dreaming that the plane crashed and I'm alone with the hot beautiful young woman sitting across from are alone on a deserted island having tons of great sex. Soon, someone will wake me and tell me we've landed. You and your mother will be gone already and I will have to deal with the reality that this woman that I've fallen in love with is just an old man's fantasy." "But we're here and this is real and I am real!" "You don't love me. If this is just a dream and we do arrive safely and I do ask you on a date, you will think I'm a creepy old man. If those boys had been decent then you would be banging them instead of me. If you do marry me when we get rescued, you will realize you made a big mistake and leave me a broken hearted old fool. Or worse, some lawyer will convince you I took advantage of you."

Went from hot bodied young sex loving woman to Stage 5 Clinger!!!