by ptm
Good story so far. As for the erotica just think of the things you have done or would like to do and go from there. As long as you have a good base plot everything else is extra, (and fun)!!!!
Keep up the good work.
So, yes, the cliff-hanger from Ch. 03 was effectively resolved, but now we need MORE!
Never mind the erotica-quotient. Sex is good, but it's the story that keeps us reading. Whenever it comes to a trade-off, choose story over erotica every time.