All Comments on 'Casualty of Chance Ch. 03'

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BooomerBooomerabout 14 years ago
Nobody Writes This Stuff Better!

"Lowering Kelli's cunt off his cock as he slowly turned her away from the wall, the disjoining of their two sexual organs sounded just like a champagne bottle had been shaken then uncorked. Several globs of ejaculate quickly belched from Kelli's vagina and oozed straight down to the carpet, leaving a messy but telling trail as Gerald carried her to the bed."

The sexual imagery that you convey is incredible.

Your timing and built up - flawless. And just when you think it couldn't get any better ... there's that inventive, startling knock on the cheap hotel room door.

YOU GO DOG!!!

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