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by CurtWrites

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Damn ...

... the dam!

GrandPaMGrandPaMalmost 8 years ago
a very nice start...

...but the rest of the story seriously needs telling.

Why/how was her skirt torn, and why did she choose his desk to hide under, rather than some other way of dealing with it? ...or was she in there first, and THEN it tore/was torn by her deliberately?

...those questions, for openers, would seem to be the lynchpins for the rest of the story. her reaction to the needle-prick was an interesting clue as well. ...and no talking between them at all? interesting, but very unlikely.

CurtWritesCurtWritesalmost 8 years agoAuthor
damned spell check

Damn, it's "dam." I don't think there is a way to edit.

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