All Comments on 'Cat - College Cowgirl Ch. 01'

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Suckittrebek88Suckittrebek88almost 6 years ago

Love the story super excited to read the other chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Second Person Narratives Require Experience in Writing

You appear to not have enough.

Why tell Cat what happened? She was there and experienced it. (Unless you want to work in an amnesia angle.)

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