by ZackOShea
This is fun stuff. Keep going -- long time, no write ...
Still a great read, but always hopeful you will pick it up again and continue.
Wonderfuly amazing story, can't wait to read more, although it's been over year and I'm very much fearing the worst.
My favorite turn of phrase was ""Spit it out" said the woman who always swallows." There were many clever phrases and metaphors. This is much better crafting than most of the writing here. I hope you will get back into the story line and finish your treat for us.