by Sputnik57
Hallo Sputnik57!
If I had seen what I thought was some fucking prick raping a child.... I would have done a lot more than just take a few picture,,, yes!!
I think that he should learn about humiliation. Having his anal sphincter rubbed raw would be a nice start. Those heavily ribbed pegging cocks will do that to you after a few hours. I liked the character development. It could even have started and finished with the first chapter.
Excellent storyline :). I can feel the panic in Fenton as his world is changing !!
What, indeed?! I do hope you will let us know in subsequent chapters - a great story - many thanks and five stars.