Catching My Dream Girl

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AverageBear
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I wiped tears from the corners of her eyes with my thumb.

"It's okay, sweetheart," I said. Man, did it feel good to call her that in real life, not just in my dreams. "I don't think anything of the sort. You're the best thing that's ever happened to me."

"You know, Derek," she smiled through her tears, "it's kind of ironic. I DID tell you how I felt about you, over and over, as we were growing up..."

"How so?" I asked.

"How many times have you heard me say, 'Catch me if you can!'?"

"About a million..." I replied.

"Don't you get it? I was trying to get you to PURSUE me, silly..."

"Holy shit!" I exclaimed, "I never did get it. I can't believe how STUPID I am."

"Don't say that about yourself, Derek," she chided, "you're the smartest man I've ever known. And besides -- you CAUGHT me." She winked and smiled at me.

"I'm just wondering - not that it matters - but why did you leave me alone in your apartment this morning?" I queried.

"I just walked down to the market for a few things. I was going to scrounge us up some breakfast. But when I got back you were gone. I was worried that maybe you were having second thoughts about what you had said - that maybe you didn't really mean it in the cold, sober light of day."

I took her in my arms and held her tight, then locked lips with her for a slow, deliberate kiss. I wanted to remove any lingering doubts from her mind. Her tongue felt SO good against mine. It may have been five minutes before we came up for air.

"So, my sweet girl, what am I going to do with you?" I asked absent-mindedly, not really thinking about what I was saying.

"Is your roommate at home?" she asked.

"Nah, he'll be back tonight. Did you want to thank him for ratting out my location yesterday?"

"That's not exactly what I had in mind," Holly replied with a grin, "I was really just wondering if we were alone. I thought you might want to practice the 'making babies' thing with me..."

THE END

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well, this is the 2nd story of yours that I read and again a solid 5. Love your uplifting stories that gives one a good feeling. Keep up the excellent work PLEASE.

julianmarquezjulianmarquezover 1 year ago

Well, I do love me some romance. Great story!

Bicurious_77Bicurious_77almost 2 years ago

Good story. Reminded me of a few of my dream girls growing up and how I’d do anything to be with them. Great build up. Describing Holly’s dilemma made the end result more satisfying. Looking forward to my next read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
One of the Best. So hot

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site or any other. The build-up was so good. The emotions were real and raw. The non-con theme was done with a certain grace. It's like you gave us this sweet, dark Valentine's kiss. Thank you for writing it.

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallover 7 years ago
Short, sweet and with a delicious twist

This really is a nice little story. Great story arc, interesting characters you can relate to, a sharp focus on a single premise that is worked out to a satisfactory conclusion and some pure raw emotion and lust to balance it all out. Well done!

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