All Comments on 'Catching My Wife and Her Brother Ch. 01'

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geminimissiongeminimissionover 7 years ago
Good start!

Very hot premise and a great start to the story. Definitely need part two of the story! Hubby should get a creampie at the end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice work, but...

Could have used a little more detail about Annie, I might have tweaked it a little, but good story, solid writing. However, I hate when you guys take what's essentially one story and chop it up into "chapters." Are you just to impatient to get it out there that you can't finish writing it first? I liked it, but I doubt I'll remember to come back to find part 2. Docking you a star for posting an unfinished story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good story

You should continue it!

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 4 years ago
Poor Alex

He didn't stay long....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

My sister stopped midway through intercourse years ago but always does things that make me think she wants to try it again. She and her husband invited my wife and I to sex party.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story kind of short. There must be some more action. An opportunity for everyone to have a Longterm sex festival.

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