All Comments on 'Catching Serena Ch. 03'

This story was so great. It really got me wet, and really made me wish that I was that girl! The only suggestion is more action and less dialogue.

If you need any pics to inspire you, let me know. . . 23 female with an amazing body who loves to inspire!

i thought the dialogue was perfect... very nice

Wow...Stunning..Btw cud i plz get the email address of the girl who 'loves to inspire'? Because me too im going to post some stories with the same criteria in the same category...

Wow my dick is so hard reading this series, I just wish I was fucking Serena, mmmm I'm still stroking my hard dick

Almost came myself!

Too short, good ideas that could've been drawn out and more detailed

Lost interest in the story as soon as daddy had her start stripping off for his poker buddies. Hell, Id of bounced their asses the moment the first one said he wanted to fuck her! ....wasnt overly thrilled with her showing her tits to the teener boys at the party for cash either. Hell, being daddy's slut means just being his slut, not for party acquaintences or poker losers. Oh well, it was enjoyable up till that point :(