All Comments on 'Catching Serena'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great writing

More Serena please....

don87654don87654about 16 years ago
Natural...just plain natural

We need more chapters to this one. Perhaps "Daddy" can teach her more about sex to the point that she wants to make him a natural Daddy.

dfwlisadfwlisaabout 16 years ago
mmmmmmmm, Yummy!

I love the story. I hope you continue this and keep it just as hot as this one.

Love to read about the growing up process and the education process... Love to see this sweet lil girl with some friends who like to learn also.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good except.....

it was a good story except two things, 1: cused to the point it was just kinda anoying and 2: u obviously dont realize how much anal trully hurts a girl her first time. im sure u dont give a shit, just thought id throw in my two cents

jim2268jim2268over 14 years ago
taking the step daughter

fantastic story catching Serena. reading this was like watch it all take place awesome writing.

yollie123yollie123almost 13 years ago
Interesting....

good plot.. sex is hotter... you must write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Holy shit this was so fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Totally Agree!!!!

This is so fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Yep, enjoyed it for the most part, other than the anal bit where he's fucking her with no lube and not any finger stretching either. 😂😂

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Yep, enjoyed it for the most part, other than the anal bit where he's fucking her with no lube and not any finger stretching either. 😂😂

tazz4fun69tazz4fun69almost 7 years ago
great start

enjoyed it alot. was rock hard the whole time while reading it

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