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All Comments on 'Catching the Eye of a Mob Boss Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fucking hell

Why the fuck are the chapters so short, at this pace we will get bored and move on .or you will stop submissions abruptly and never finish like so many others have done.

For our sake 2-3 chapters at once please :) TY.

SonicdaiseySonicdaiseyabout 6 years ago

I'm afraid I may have to agree with the previous commenter. These chapters are too short. They don't contain enough story content to make someone want to know more. Jace may be catching the eye of the mob boss but he's not catching mine at all.

Her11Her11about 6 years agoAuthor
Again wait for chapter 3

Chapter 3 is going to be much longer. Chapter 2 was submitted before comments were posted for chapter 1. I'm a new author and still figuring out my pacing. Please be patient the next chapter will be posted in at most about two days.

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