by biggun76
sorry, too cheesey for me. i think you need more sex and less cheese
Sometimes you need a little cheese to go with the usual whine **.
A well written story with a happy ending. I LIKE happy endings. But to each his(or her) own.
Enjoyable!
Rob Conner
No, not cheesey - I don't like cheese, but I liked this! The sex could have been a tad longer - maybe when then carried on, later?
Lukas