by hot_honey
Absolutely loved the story, as well as the honesty and emotion between the siblings. You wrote what is possibly the best sex scene I've read in a long time, and you did it all without butchering the English language. Brilliant work, 5 stars.
Excellent story, and I agree, terrific grammar and writing skill! ...and finally a writer on here that just doesn't jump in and say that anal sex is all easy and painless and good. I think so many writers here give people that have never had anal sex false expectations and they will either have a big surprise coming when they try, or wind up hurting someone. :/
...a nice, clean ending that left the story in s comfortable place without having to write in a moving in together (or other type of) ending.
Thanks and will look forward to more stuff!
Great grammar, pacing and build-up; a very enjoyable and well written story, 5 stars!