All Comments on 'Cathy'

Please, please, please write a second chapter! What an absolutely fabulous piece!

" To be continued " That is one promise I hope, no pray that you will keep. And please do not wait too long, because I am already turning blue, holding my breath (GRIN)

Congratulations!!! A truly well written story with a brilliant build-up. Be sure to follow through on your promise for more.

For a first story, you should be very proud of yourself. Keep 'em cumming!

Marvellous - highly erotic and very well written. What a lucky guy!

please write more... first part was great

You caught her ambivalence beautifully. Only her anger at thinking she's deserted on awakening wasn't quite right, but the pushme-pullyou of desire, first time or even otherwise (we get naked in more ways than merely physical, and remain shy about all of them)is wonderfully presented. More!

It was amazing, Cathy's unsureness was perfected. I really loved how descriptive you are, I saw the whole thing in my inner eye. Keep wring because you are one of the best!

What a great and well written story. You show a lot of talent and i hope that you not only tell more of the story but write a lot more. I loved the way she kept changing her mind and I would think a girl would do that in real life.

A great eye for detail;

Wonderful switching between inner and outer worlds.

Cathy's confusion/willingness/shyness/wantonness is really brought out well here. This is a sweet, sexy story and very well written.

Wonderful author! I hope we find a lot more posts!

Beautifully written. A lovely fantasy.

Very hot first time!

Love her, looking forward to Ch 2

5 and fave