All Comments on 'Cat's In The Cradle'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Cat's In The Cradle

that was hot wish i could do that with my dad always wanted to be his lover his sissy cock sucker

alalualaluabout 6 years ago

LOVE the detail. Great writing, friend!

blackknight314blackknight314about 6 years ago
Nicely done.

Glad that they made up. Did Dave ever get to fuck his dad? Just a passing question.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice but could have been more "realistic"

Very well written story, it started quite well and was so hot and "realistic" until Dave asked to be fucked! C'mon, it was understandable he accepted his father's physical love and they could make out but wanting to get fucked is not believable at all. They should have masturbated each other or even rubbed dicks together, but no oral or anal sex.

Hope you'll write a similar story but less "porn fantasy", if you know what I mean.

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(RETIRED FROM WRITING AS OF MAY 2018) Australian author. Early 30s. Feminist. Not single, so don't hit on me. But please do tell me if you enjoyed my stories, or not - I am open to *constructive* criticism. I try to have realistic characters in my stories - well, as realisti...