All Comments on 'Caught!'

Loved it 5*

Rob may be a prankster, but the knowledge of women he gathered from Gino made him a hero in Erica's eyes.

Enjoyed your story and hope you do well in the contest.

One of the best stories I have ever read about a pair of lovers. Great start to finish. Every high school needs a 'Prankster Club'. Sure would improve the learning environment.

Not only was it a good story with likable characters, but it was funny to boot. I've got to remember the bb in the valve cap. I know somebody that has too much hot air, and so I will remain anonymous this time. ;-)

I'm a sucker for stories where the good gallant goofball rescues the girl!

Ahazura, one of my favorite authors, you did well even if it doesn't win. I like the story, good likeable hero and supporting characters. There were a few words I had to mentally fill in while reading, but still a 5 star effort. Looking forward to more!

Thanks for sharing.

Rnebular

Refreshing to read a story that has a lead in and doesn't have sex every paragraph.

Loved it 5***** stars ,you are now in my favorites

Thanks for writing it and good luck on the contest.

This story was fun, and it was good. Wasn't a 5-star to me, and it left a lot of room for expansion, but it was a fun quick read. Keep writing :)

It's hanging in the air, what happened thereafter?

I loved your story the considerate care for the woman. Hope you do well it is the best I have read this year.

Very good story, and I for one, would love to read more about these two.

I'm recently going through tough times because I've found out my bf was cheating. I was looking for some romance and stumbled upon this. It literally had helped me so much dealing with it, knowing their can be a happily ever after. I want so much more. Please write more on this, I wanna see their love grow, and how people deal, etc... Please write more.

thanks

It was a great pleasure to read this. It is truly a good story even without the sex, which is much more fun to read. Please keep writing more, and maybe someday catch us up on where Robbie and Erika go from here. We can tell that you have a lot more stories to tell us.

Food for thought (specially for boys) lol xD

and its kinda like I'm watching a movie

delightful

well written & a most enjoyable read

wonderful mix of dialogue & narrative , which is something few Authors on this site can consistantly deliver .. everything here flowed together seemlessly ..

a most worthy 5 stars

or 1 good turn deserves another, TK U MLJ LV NV

It was fun reading something with a different story line idea. A five star rating from me as I loved all your new twists and the flowing story. Thanks for sharing.

Cute story, and I assume not meant to be taken all that seriously, but please allow me the indulgence for a few mild criticisms.

The pranksters leave him naked in school, and they didn't stick around to watch him, or even get a bigger audience?

The richest businessman in town is a restaurant owner? Usually they own a factory or a bank or something.

They're so rich that Gino is in a geriatric ward instead of a private rest home or even at home with private duty nurses?

Thanks! I am still learning how much exposition to put in my stories.

Tony owns multiple businesses outright and has financed many more. He is by no means Gates or Buffet rich but he is a big money man in the town.

Gino was only getting treatments at the hospital, not living there. He probably could have afforded private health care but he was a bit on the cheap side so going to the hospital saved him some bucks even though he had money.

Good point about the Pranksters. In retrospect they would have at least put a spotter out there to catch him.

thanks for the feedback!

Funny, sexy, yet delightfully tasteful. Well done!

Only one little thing I would have changed... six months, no contact? That gap needs to be bridged, no beautiful woman would stick around without at least some contact.

All in all, however, a wonderful, great story.

Silly but still funny, and very entertaining. Thanks for it.

i have read now some of your stories and have to say they are all pretty good

but i do have to get my opnion in about this i love meat and i would hunt for it if necesary but what i truly hate is people who hunt for sport in my book these people are the big fucking cowards and i allways sugest to the fuckers that we should hunt each other but like the cowards they are they just try to get away couze offcourse it is no longer fun when you can get shot back is it

and yes she said she took the meat home and donated the rest but the only reason she whent was for fun not to put food on the table

That likes an ending to a story. This one begs for a little more. All of your stories I have read so far are excellent but a couple could have used another half or full page. Or maybe not. Like I said it's my preference, not yours.

Cute story! Where is the Loving Wife?

4*

Sorry. I missed the category. As Romance, it is a 5*.

Nice story. Original and well thought out. Five stars.

Well when it happened to me everyone just pointed , laughed and took video ! I remember one hot teacher said , extremely loudly after pointing at my penis , “ That looks just like a penis except a lot smaller “ , everyone laughed especially when my bladder let go . Needless to say I quit school that day which was a chore in itself as I was only in 2nd grade !

Like it

Loved the story. A sequel would be great! I think these characters have more stories in them.

It's cute

Nice tell, but how could she knows that she was clean? She slept with a cheating guy

LOL, fun little story. Love the pranks and HER

Short but enjoyable. Perhaps a sequel is in order.

Delightful

Nice story but it needs more of an ending. Gave five stars anyway.

So sweet.

One of your best !!!! Keep writing.......please !