All Comments on 'Caught'

This story really did it for me! Hizchick writes a potent erotic story. I especially enjoyed how she makes it real, with the small everyday details along with the blistering, creative descriptions of the sex. Leaves the impression that this is surely not purely fiction, at least part memoir, and so all the more exciting a read. Great job!

Had me horny right from the beginning. Hischick is a new but powerful writer. Wish I could meet her. I'd probably get hornier still. Reading her story left me stiff.

Definitely one of the best new writers at Lit! Please keep submitting your wonderful stories.

Hi hizchick,

I thought your story was an excellent turn-on and beautifully told. I gave it five stars. It's good to see you Ynaks do htings much the same way us Aussies do.

Please write some more.

Les.