All Comments on 'Caught'

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sacksackover 17 years ago
Great start....

The ending was a little abrupt. This seems to be a pattern with some of your stories, you like to leave the reader hanging cold turkey. Not everyone would appreciate such a practice!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
nice and sexy

very nice and hot!

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