All Comments on 'Caught'

"her nipples stood to attention and already looked swollen despite the fact I had been unable to take them in my mouth"

how stilted can you get?

Try again..

a fun little story...can't wait to see where it goes!

Thank you for your comments, this is my first story and spelling etc isn't my forte. I hope my errors didn't spoil your enjoyment of the story I will try to do better next time!

Anonymous means that you don't have the guts to put you name to your complaining post. I don't recall anywhere where it says you HAVE TO read a story. This story is hardly "stilted". I found it to be very erotic, and it certainly gave me a charge! Keep contributing, tingling!

I thought this story was very good. Not really my scene but still enjoyable. And trust me Mr/Mrs/Miss Tingling many writers even the established ones have spelling errors or rubbish grammar so don't worry about it. Carry on writing.

it grew in intensity as it progressed then ended with a grand finale. Well done, although it did need a little more polishing to become a truly great story.

Dude this was fantastic

Lots of potential for future episodes