by audraleigh
Sometimes we get caught up and critical about punctuation, grammar, story line, believability, etc...
Not so here! That was a hot frenzy of unexpected animal lust and carnal desire that is as believable as can be. I loved every word and I only wish ... mmm
I wish my daddy would've done that!! My brother did but not daddy!!! :)
That was amazing. I read and re-read while having multiple O's. Beautifully written.
Such a beautiful and delicate story, i completely believed it, a really enjoyable read 5*
.... in the moment from the first line- spell binding writing!!! I can't wait to read more form you audraleigh.
Regards
Jeeper3
I have wanted to seduce my stepdad and get preggo by him too. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com hit me up daddy. I won't tell anyone except my bi gf brit. Lol
This is a favorite fantasy of mine .... got me hard - and kept me that way throughout.
:)
This was amazing. I came multiple times. Excellent writing and I love your other story too. Keep up the good work!