All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 01'

by MarleeM

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WOW

Sounds like the start of something exciting between mother and son. Maybe next time she will remove her skirt since this time it almost got soiled. Maybe also mother and son on cam faces hidden for the son's friends

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story...

Please write more of this adventure. I know you followed him upstairs. What happened next? This was your best, please don't let it die...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fun short story

Many mom's like to tease son and friends. It is fun but they have to control the actions. It can be a very beneficial situation.

imharmless69imharmless69almost 12 years ago
Welcome back

I've been waiting a long time to see this story continue, and you didn't disappoint. Hope to see more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I am glad u r back

I waited almost one year ,But I am glad u r back Thank u great story Don't wait another year just keep on going :)

hosewanker00hosewanker00almost 12 years ago
Nice to hear from you, Marleem

Can't wait for Chapter 02.

hosevoyuerhosevoyueralmost 12 years ago
Enjoy this Story Line

Great read. Reminds me of some of my younger experiences. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
a great story by a highly talented writer!

The author captures perfectly the fierce excitement of Ricky, a testosterone-charged boy, as his fingers travel up his mother's thigh, approaching the cunt he knows lies in waiting between his mother's legs. Naturally the boy's young prick is stiffer than it's ever been before, and Miss M. perfectly depicts the mother's sly interest in the raging hard on that's threatening to burst through her boy's basketball shorts. The lad is so overheated by the proximity of his fingers to his own mother's twat that he can't control his young body. His young balls let loose right in front of his mother, and his mom watches thrilled as her boy jizzes his shorts and his precious young semen soaks through. Her motherly cunt tingles at this visual proof of her darling baby boy's manly virility--his fresh young sperm from his potent young balls. She scoops up some of her boy's sperm and puts it on her tongue. Real soon mother will be getting it directly from the source, as Ricky blows his balls right in his mother's mouth, again and again.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
A hot little tryst between mom and son.

Perhaps a bit on the stocking fetish. but young guys have a fetish over anything as long it is connected to his mom or a mature woman.

chuckyboy86chuckyboy86over 11 years ago
good reading

I love to mutual masturbate with 35 plus ladies on webcam and I could just imagine what it would have been like when i was a teen if the home computer as we know it today would have existed. I'd love to read about Ricky's mom cybering, cam to cam mutual masturbating with his friends and Ricky spying her..getting caught and getting some relief.

csltcsltover 9 years ago
"Sorry, Mom," he said, opening his eyes. "I didn't mean to get carried away."

Hmmmmmm...

Great start!

breathlessmumbreathlessmumover 8 years ago
Most thrilling

Loved it so far. A quizzical look on his face, was most memorable, for me atleast. Well worth a 5 star, Marlee. In the end, its not going to matter how many breaths I took, but how many moments took my breaths away! Wonderful read, you have captured my attention, an my short gasps as well. xx

TabooBroSonTabooBroSonalmost 8 years ago
Intense

Without having to be explicit you create such dynamic erotic settings. Emotional eroticism is more powerful than explicit, but when you get explicit it is nice too ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Though it was hot I'm pretty sure none of this ever happened. Lol pretty hot though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Curious.

So, what exactly, was his mom doing on the webcam in front of the boys? I'd love to know.

hoosierdaddy62hoosierdaddy62over 4 years ago
A great start

Finely detailed and a good pace. Very well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
mom

great story very sexy well done made me hard

nylonpunkienylonpunkieabout 4 years ago
Such a sexy beginning

Nylon Mothers' need neck rubs, it's only fair to repay the favour.

Very hot start, xx

oldbutnew2001oldbutnew2001about 3 years ago

This is the beginning of one hot story.

jerryp2jerryp2over 1 year ago

i loved it very sexy lucky boy and what a fantastic mom

M45divorcedM45divorcedabout 1 year ago

Well, that was a pretty damn good story! Well done Marlee, super hot ending.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a12 months ago

Liked the opening of the story. The mother's sensitivity to her son's emotional and psychological state was beautifully written. I found the son's mental maturity to recognize his mother is a woman is amazing. Likewise, the fact that he knew his mother was an online personality which his friends discussed with him and he did not become jealous, embarrassed nor angry again belied his maturity beyond his age. Finally, his admission to his mother of his knowledge of her activities and his friends conversations about same show the strength of their relationship.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Very nice ..reminds me of my mom ..when I was 11 I tried to jump a four foot chain link fence on my bike.miss and hit my nuts . Mom came to the rescue

Jmorgan001Jmorgan0019 months ago

I absolutely love your story 😍 Well written and a huge turn on. I can't wait to read the other parts

MeanOralSexToy4womenMeanOralSexToy4women6 months ago

Real or not all the guys who read this will think, “I wish I could find a MILF like her. I would do anything she wants to touch her……”.

jerryp2jerryp25 months ago

this is a very well written story and oh so very sexy i have masturbated to every section

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