All Comments on 'Caught in the Act'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Found this gem and I like it a lot

Nice story. Very sensual. Only problem is the you and your.

Otherwise it was perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good

I liked the buildup to the actual sex. The problem was the sex though haha. It was only one paragraph. If you could elaborate a little more then it would be a great story. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow

I absolutely loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
amazing!

i normally dont leave comments, but this was just too good. the build up, the detail, the anxiety... just amazing. this was just too good. i am glad i read it!!! i think i might wanna be a cat burgular now. jk

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