All Comments on 'Caught in the Act!'

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WhitneymrWhitneymrover 12 years ago

Good job and you've sure left this set for a continuation of this story line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Interesting premise.

But it'd have been better -- for me, at least -- if Natalie really had to seduce him, without Alex's permission. Long, slow teasing. Playing with his cock outside his pants. More dialog about whether he'd like to see her tits. What did he think they looked like? What did he like about them? What did he want to do to/with them? Had he ever thought about them while he masturbated? How often?

Natalie asking if he'd like to take her blouse off? Or should she?

Natalie initiating getting his pants off and cock out. Long teasing/edging handjob while she directed him how to play with her tits.

Would he like to feel how wet her pussy was? Would he like to taste it?

Three stars.

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