by guest6
Another new writer and a marvellous story as an introduction! You imply, without actually saying, that there will be more to this; I sincerely hope there is - you are a fine writer and your subject has long been one of my (many) fantasies.
Do say you're going to continue! Will five stars be anything of an incentive?
Liked the bit with the horse. Looking forward to more.
Or the end of the beginning? Maybe worth yet another chapter or two in my opinion. Nice writing job though.....