All Comments on 'Caught in the Act Ch. 01'

May your prolific pen never rest. I have learnt to like your hero, but still yearn for any love-acts of my first love - Todd. Being a silly blonde, I wait for the last episode of each tale for the explanation. I still think Todd or one of his superstud mates should do Priya Ajmani.

My deepest respect for your craft.

Always enjoy a good Mystery. and this seems to be getting deeper as it goes. one thing does the Commander have a family or Significant other.

Very well written and engrossing

The story is excellent and I love the way you co-ordinate so many strands, let alone the chapters. 5⛤

Very good story. I really enjoy your Phonetics use of the law firms names in your stories. The best is Dewey, Chemtham and Howe from the The Three. Stooges short fils. But you have come up with some original ones. Good work.

Mc. is to perfect for my liking, it's a good story, obvious whose done it, but the reason whilst also looking obvious doesn,'t seem to have any connection with my suspect so it's quite a good mystery.

*****Thanks for sharing

A fun story with the little comedy Easter eggs. Your writing style has always excelled and your well thought out stories have been a staple I have enjoyed reading greatly. Thanks for posting one more in a long line of wonderful stories with incredible depth and interesting characters.

Lexx xoxo