All Comments on 'Caught in the Downpour Ch. 01'

I read your disclaimer and enjoyed the legal ease wording, but you know the bored and hiding as they read ceowd will still berate you for attempting anything.

Good story. Moved along well. Plausible as adult fiction. I liked it, and hope you continue on with this story line.

Perhaps you could work with an editor and resubmit this in English...?

A little choppy but a hot tale nonetheless. I'm not personally crazy about the drug use but to each their own I guess.

I liked the story, but i think you need an editor

Promising start.....until you mentioned the drugs.I know it is a sad reflection on our culture these days but I come to Literotica to get away from things like this.I don't need this impinging on my enjoyment of the great lesbian sex stories on this site.Sorry. No stars.