All Comments on 'Caught in the Rain'

To anyone thinking this sounds familiar, that's because I recently submitted an incomplete version of this story. I had it removed and submitted this full version instead. Sorry for the mix up and enjoy!

I liked this one. Not quite as fantastic as your brilliant series "Paradice Lost" (which hopefully will have a sequel or three someday), but still a great read.

I really liked this story, but I hope you will write another. Maybe in the next one she could be stripped?

This was lovely.

I think you captured an essential facet of bondage. How many ways do people seek to find themselves with what amounts to only so much distraction?

I adored the flirtation you described through the window.

Simply lovely.

Thanks for the comments everyone!

I've just rediscovered the original story this is based on, titled 'Busted' from the now defunct Tied and True Tales site. You can read the story here via the Wayback Machine: https://web.archive.org/web/20071022144831/http://tied-and-true-tales.com:80/fiction/myownfic/busted.htm