All Comments on 'Caught In The Rain Ch. 02'

But then it's "Fiction" & not REAL. I'm eager to read the next chapter since he'll take her anus cherry. Just a suggestion in future if you write an incest story. Make it a bit soft & romantic. Reluctance, force, dominace is OK, but both parties should enjoy it. This is like a one way traffic. Daddy is the only one having the cake.

"make it a bit soft & romantic", like the reviewer's Schlong, no doubt.

Good work, please continue. My unsolicited advice would be to include more detail on specifically what she feels, degraded, excited, exploited, betrayed? Perhaps her body betrays her, ...

It needs to be longer

more!! his dominance makes me so horny. i love stories like this. keep em cummin!

and delightfully so. She shows her need and his control. A little strong on the pain aspect but it works. On to chapter 3.

Oh my god!!! This was so good!!