All Comments on 'Caught Off Guard'

All this interesting build up and then ... then nothing! The way it ended was a let down. And if there's supposed to be a follow up, a simple "to be continued" would have been nice.

yeah sorry about leaving out the to be continued BUT there is a part 2 being written right now and almost finished. I love how you said it was a good build up though :)

I think I will apply for the police academy to get in on the opportunities to get into the pants of unwilling girls.

This is better because he knew her and watched her grow up. Without stopping her for speeding, he would never have been able to taste the goodies.