All Comments on 'Caught-Out'

This story is too violent, when it could have been much more erotic. The babysitter needed to get knocked up just as the wife returned home, and then the wife gotten into the babysitter's cunt with her tongue and made love to her that way, all the while the husband's fishies were swimming to the babysitter's womb.

This story would have been much more erotic this way and been developed into an ongoing 3-some with both women getting pregnant and living with the husband under the same roof, and having many, many babies.

The story was great....I cant wait to hear the next sequences and how they will use the babysitter as well as what is planned for the husband

This story is too violent, when it could have been much more erotic. The babysitter needed to get knocked up just as the wife returned home, and then the wife gotten into the babysitter's cunt with her tongue and made love to her that way, all the while the husband's fishies were swimming to the babysitter's womb. This story would have been much more erotic this way and been developed into an ongoing 3-some with both women getting pregnant and living with the husband under the same roof, and having many, many babies.

It started out so erotic and ended so violently. This could have really been a very hot submission....but!!

I loved the story and cant wait for the rest i loved the way it started out as a seduction then went to a forced. Keep up the good work.

I am sure that the wife had an idea that her husband would take advantage of a teen babysitter. The wife had her fun as well and the husband received his wish to make a deposit in the horny teen. Well at least he ass will be nice and wide when she arrives for her next sitting. She should be made go naked around the house as part of her punishment after the children have gone to bed. Some say that the teen should get pregnant, give it time, this could turn into a very enjoyable story.

I liked this but it should have been in the 'Non-consent' section. Because I didn't expect the domination and forced fuck I got weirdly turned off at the end. But that's just me.

You have a nice touch. Keep writing.

Both my wife and I loved the story. I hope you continue the story and pay no attention to the detractors. Your writing is good, as well as your story development.

this story had a great beginning and started out pretty hot but it got too violent.

i think the wife should have walked in and gotten into the action instead of raping her

So this husband and father, not in his first youth, amazingly stays hard *after* cumming in her mouth so he can pump her pussy? Yeah right..

good story but what happens next?

This story needs a follow up. It could be a mini-series.

More!

Please keep writing.