All Comments on 'Caught Out by Mom's Friend Paula Ch. 01'

story sucked! thanks for wasting 5 mins of my life i will never get back!!

very disappointing.

you need to dflesh it out a little bit and the content of the dtory does not match the title. also rather short to be a part one. but continue and let these asses leave comments on the fly bye. if they had something to say then use your name.

Great buildup, but you need to deliver the beef!

Cut it to short can't wait till the next chapter. you had me all build up waiting for the encounter with her and then like on TV you stoped short of the pay off or even the climax of the story and said to be continued. LOL should make you notify me of when Ch.02 is ready for cutting me off short. LOL

that ive started to read the comments first so didnt waste my time reading this one

This is far too short to have been submitted. If there's more of it to come, try working with one of Lit's volunteer editors and see if you can turn it into something worthwhile.

But don't submit anything this short again!

It (he) has potential, but the story was just getting started ----- and

then Whaaa ??

Where is the rest of the story?