All Comments on 'Causing Ripples'

Great story, love the contrast between the demureness of a full swimsuit, and the blatancy of the "Models" strutting! For me, there is nothing sexier than a well-dressed woman, an occasional glimpse, rather than a full frontal shop window!

Would love to read more of your stories!

This a great first story. The detail made it visually remarkable.

Hits all the right notes for me. Well done.

Very nicely written and I agree with the comment about the detail making it very vivid. There’s a merciful lack of porn cliché. The writer has grasped that statistics about bra size and height and weight and dick length are really just irrelevant and mood-killing distractions; what matters are the thoughts and sensations of the participants.

That said, I don’t really like the type of sex the writer describes. He treats the girl as something to be used.

I agree with one of the other comments - this definitely hits all the right notes. The comment about treating the woman as just a tool for sex is also valid, but after a bit of protest, she is obviously very into it. And, he did make sure that she received some pleasure out of the encounter as well.

Very well written, descriptive, and, for me, super hot.

I'll be checking out more of your stories.

Thanks!