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Click hereGripping her hips again, I slam her down on me as hard as I can, push up and in as far as I can to feel as much as possible of her around and on me from tip to base, and then my muscles ripple and clench, and the explosion races down my spine, ripping through my abdomen and bursting out of me with a force that takes my breath away. I shout and groan against the skin of her neck and let the sensations wash over me, feel all my nerves tingle and sing, feel my heart jackhammer in my chest, feel my lungs pump like a bellows. All my strength leaves me in a single, wonderful, mighty flood.
Then it slowly, slowly trickles back in, together with conscious thought. I draw my fingers away from where they have almost fused with the skin of her hips and wrap my arms around her stomach. That way, there's no more friction on my hypersensitive, post-orgasmic cock, and also I pull her into the embrace just because. She nestles against my chest and lets her head fall back against my shoulder, turning her face toward my neck to hide it there, still breathing hard. I do believe I've worn her out some. Wouldn't have thought it possible.
Finally, a demanding water sport that draws a crowd. When I tell her, she giggles somewhat tiredly. I've exhausted her. "Pervert," she mumbles.
I am inclined to agree.
I agree with one of the other comments - this definitely hits all the right notes. The comment about treating the woman as just a tool for sex is also valid, but after a bit of protest, she is obviously very into it. And, he did make sure that she received some pleasure out of the encounter as well.
Very well written, descriptive, and, for me, super hot.
I'll be checking out more of your stories.
Thanks!
Very nicely written and I agree with the comment about the detail making it very vivid. There’s a merciful lack of porn cliché. The writer has grasped that statistics about bra size and height and weight and dick length are really just irrelevant and mood-killing distractions; what matters are the thoughts and sensations of the participants.
That said, I don’t really like the type of sex the writer describes. He treats the girl as something to be used.
This a great first story. The detail made it visually remarkable.
Great story, love the contrast between the demureness of a full swimsuit, and the blatancy of the "Models" strutting! For me, there is nothing sexier than a well-dressed woman, an occasional glimpse, rather than a full frontal shop window!
Would love to read more of your stories!