All Comments on 'Cautionary Family Tail'

Love it!

You left a lot of openings to not follow up on Evan and his Family. Now that he has met his Mother,Aunt,Sister . and Impregnated his Step-Mom it's time for Evan to get with it.

Tail has many definitions, including (1) the elongated appendage on the posterior part of some animals, (2) the hindmost part of something, (3) to follow, and (4) to provide with a tail. Tale means (1) a recital of events, (2) a story, or (3) a lie. So tale usually has to do with telling stories of some kind, while tail involves one thing being behind another.

Just a grammar snob, weighing in! (Yes, I know I ended with a preposition.)

A grammar snob with no sense of the double entendre, perhaps, Worshipper622? *smile*

This story got my attention, now i need more.

This story begs to continue for a while yet.

this would be really good with another chapter

Although I thought the story was extremely well written, I did think that Evan's character was a mess with the whole conquering of virgin attitude. I thought the sex was hot as well as his familia envoys progressed but a little more humility would have been better.