All Comments on 'Cedar Hill Cheerleaders Ch. 05'

This story was pretty well written, and it really did turn me on. I think you should just add a bit more detail into it to make it even better. Describe the character's faces a bit more, and also describe what they're doing to each other better. Other than that, I think the concept was really great. Hope you keep writing! :)

I give you props for including some people with unusual sex parts, did you have an incident like that?

I'm well fitted out myself (9 inches long, just over 2 inches fat); so yes, I relate to Greg in this story and to Jason in Chapter 7.