by vyronika_knight
I like how you fleshed out the characters. This was a very good story, from start to finish. Keep up the good work!
Your story progressed from "I wonder what's going to happen" to "I know what I hope happens and I wonder How" to "This is even better than I imagined." It made me feel warm inside!
Oh yes, and it was hot! (Ch.1 & 1.5)
Extremely hot story, I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!