All Comments on 'Celibate'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 7 years ago
New wine quaffed from an old bottle

If you are not deceiving , your not trying hard enough , at least in this genre. Can you really blame the narrator? He saw this beautiful woman unplucked on the vine. He saw her prime years potentially going to wither because of this idiotic celibacy / compatibility balderdash. What if she got hit by a bus ? All that purity for naught. , there was no choice but to kindly, gently soil and despoil the fair maiden.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is just disgusting

Nothing erotic. Just hate

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 4 years ago

Not even fun, or funny. Kinda sad, really. Makes a good advertisement for sex education.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thís begs for an Episode 2.

Stephanie may need a sexual partner for the first year while new hubby has his year of celebacy. Either protagonist or another man.

She also could still get an annulment by stating clearly to someone who 'happens' to be someone a court would accept, e.g. Justice of the Peace, a pastor or 2, off duty cop. Maybe Stephanie will want to sample a bunch of men.

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