All Comments on 'Cemetery Summons Ch. 22'

Nice continuation I just hope the next chapter arrives a bit faster than this one did. :)

waited months and still great stuff (lighter on the sex then any of the other chapters as well, not bad however), bastard excellent writer!

WANT MOAR!!! WANT MOAR FASTRRR!!!!!!

Don't care when the next chapter arrives as long as it arrives. Okay, I do want it sooner rather than later, just don't wan't the author to get burned out before the whole story is finished (still want to know what happens to Jack's relationship with Sam).

Anyway, the chapter is great as always, keep 'em cumming!

beautiful man. sniffs.

I hate being one of those people "oh this is getting way too inconsistent oh I'm so done with you, oh why did you have to go there and write about that one thing I didn't like"... but I just have one major thing to point out: the battle was supposed to be imminent, like THAT DAY, because Helena was performing. This assumes warp travel for the army, I'm sure. Plus, Kan was very conveniently making an escape attempt at the same time as they were about to attempt the rescue. That's way too important to drop for literal in-world months. I suspect you were putting off writing the battle because it wouldn't even have any cuddly moments or sexual tension in it. I'm done complaining now, time for Chapter 23.