All Comments on 'Centaur Love Ch. 02'

nice overall but you keep popping information like we should have known it.

is it based on a known story/game that I'm missing?

Great story so far. Hope for more 2-4 page chapters at least going forward, as the best stories have weight to them. No blaring issues this far, but like the previous comment there's some guess work with the settings of the world's species and locations.

This is a decent story spoiled by poor grammar and spelling. It just needs someone to check it over.

Great content-wise, but you need to work on the technical bits some more. I recommend finding someone to check over your work before you publish it. And if you're embarrassed about the porn parts, don't be, the setting's strong enough to survive on its own. Be proud.

I like that you keep adding world-building detail throughout the story instead of dumping it on us all at once. Adding bits and bobs throughout the story allows us to learn about this fantasy world bit by bit, and various aspects become important.

Love the story! I will continue to read. Thanks for your time and imagination.