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by maddie01

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centauri4centauri4about 16 years ago
Nice First Effort

I enjoyed your story. The characters introduced are intriguing and the "read" makes for a launching pad to future adventures. Keep up the nice effort!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 16 years ago
Great job!

This is a nice well written story, a pleasure to read!

Great work!

NeverthelessEndingNeverthelessEndingabout 1 month ago

A bit too rushed but i apologize if that's what your writing style

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