All Comments on 'Cephalon's Champion'

Is there any more to this? It doesn't really have an ending so much as it just... stops. And I'd like to read more.

There is more, but it's not written yet. :P I'm bouncing between stories right now so although I have the general outline of the next part in my head I don't know when I'll get it out. Thank you for the comment though, I'm glad you liked it. :)

wow... very good hope you write more as this part felt incomplete... and i need closure lol

thanks

I enjoyed it and would like to see more, its fun and the last part with Ata was a nicely written scene. At times it feels a little disjointed because we don't have a clear picture of what's going on and Selena seems to be remarkably douchey to the monsterous killing machine she created which seems a bit .. dumb I guess. Still overall very enjoyable,

5/5 stars

The inner dialogue was a neat difference and the content and evolution was wonderful.

I can't even imagine where it could go from here.

I really enjoyed this story. However, I felt that the story is not yet done and that there is more you can tell. Please consider writing a sequel to this story.

I dig it.

Good lighthearted story! And you do need an editor :)

It's still baffles me that he's not reacting in any way to being ripped out of his own world, ending up in some unkonwn place, having to fight some unknown enemy etc. I feel you should've paid more attention to that.

also good start, you do need an editor to help knock off the rough edges, other than that entertaining, and it deserves more chapters, well done

Can we have a sequel?

It ended just as it was getting really good. This story definitely deserves an extension. If you still need an editor, let me know, I'd be happy to help.

would be interested in more.

Please write more!!

Really well done, love the development, really wanna see what happenes with the insect creature attack. Please do more!!! Awesome :) <3

Keen to see how this develops !

So, as it's been a year since this was uploaded, I guess we're probably not going to see a continuation with the fight against the invasion and a look into Selena?

Thank you for sharing it.

Loved it hope more comes

Very good story, I mean really! How do you authors come up with such works of art like this? It’s amazing!

Thank you for this amazing novel

“I'm curious if there's anything I can do to make her happy?“ Did he just remove his dick and create a pussy to please Selena? Someone he does not know!? Why not keep both dick and pussy!!

“Why are you not mad?" she asked. I shrugged, not sure I could adequately explain my go with the flow nature.” Passive pushover you mean. Shes right tho, he got kidnapped/transformed/twisted/almost killed and he smiles at her… 0 anger or curiosity or sadness or whatever, doesnt even mourn/lament his dick..

“Here we go again. I need to be more careful about what I think.“ why lol, its a perfect moment apparently to change your body to your wish.. id make full use of it! And get back that dick.. maybe even make it bigger.

“For some reason my body burned with the need to possess this woman, to turn the lusty moans from this morning into full bodied screams of delight.” Shouldnt it be other way around? To force the women to pleasure our transformed cat to moan and scream in pleasure?

Put your shit in transgender