All Comments on 'Chad and Chelsea Ch. 01'

very well written good story very sensual keep it going as i think you will do kept me hard from start to finish well done

You hit the deck running with this one. Good pace with appropriate levels of action. Potential for follow up too. Worthwhile spending more time on proof reading/editing though, avoids silly mistakes. Look forward to more.

I loved it . Nice work .

Sibling incest tales are just about the best and your initial offering has been just outstanding! Please keep sharing your very real talent with us.

Your story is wonderful and full of fun and fantasy. You captured the emotions and actions in a quick, clear but you thoughtful manner. I liked the ending but am hoping for additional chapters to the story.

Well written and well told! Extremly erotic! Great job!

Well written and well told! Extremly erotic! Great job!

typical for this site the stupid writers start a story but don't finish it what a waste of time the only good part was they never half wrote anything else

just great.

love the suspense,they feel like real people.

read chapter 2 and even better.

hope that when chapteer 3 comes the worries will be solved.

thanks for writting it.

I thought Chelsea was taking the shower at the beginning of the story not Melinda

My younger sister and I started out playing with ourselves in front of each other when she was 11 and I was almost 13 this only went on for a few weeks before we started touching each other and then one day after school before our parents got home we took each other virginity, after that we fucked every time we were alone. This went on for years until she got married when she was 20 and now she won't fuck me anymore but every time she around and no one can see she slides her short and thong over and show me her pussy. It's not fair the way she teases me, I hate her her husband because I'm the only one that should be fucking her.