by thewetpuppy
OK when is the next chapter coming out? I like that you didn't draw out her finding his release from the chains, and him being gentle with her. The sex was amazing, very good description, easy to see it all in folding. Please add another chapter or chapters!!
That I don't see a ch.1 after the title. This story was so well written and it left so mch story to go through that it just begs to be continued or at least I am begging for it to continue
Well written and interesting story. I sincerely hope to see more from you soon.
It reads a bit like Jr ward's "story of son" ,but I loved that story too,so....lol!!! Can't wait to read more! 5 stars!
Oh gosh. This is not my first time reading this but every time I did, I keep wanting a part 2. And part 3 and more!! Lol. :) sorry. This is just one of the best ones I've ever read in this genre. It would please me greatly is you write more! Please?? :D
Love it! I have been wandering through literotica for a long time and this is probably one of the best stories I’ve ever read! I always come back to it
Please make more chapters of this masterpiece! i'm so taken with the story i kept reading it over and over again... i just hope i can read a new update on this one. i love your work btw. you're a fantastic writer!