All Comments on 'Chains'

by CalypsoInPhilly

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UnicornofLoveUnicornofLoveover 7 years ago
OK I reflected...

I think it turns him on to hurt her but he acts like its her when it's really him...i wonder what he likes then...hmmm

UnicornInPhillyUnicornInPhillyover 7 years ago
There's no anger

It's all love, he is driven to give her what she need, even if he doesn't quite fully understand it.

GigiJennyGigiJennyabout 7 years ago
Love

I absolutely love your writing. It's so clear that he loves her and enjoys doing what she needs him to do. It only seems cruel if you don't realize that she WANTS the domination mixed with the pleasure/pain. She holds the power by trusting him enough to submit in the first place. Frankly, as a Dom he is ideal; he shows careful concern and consideration for her while still pushing her limits as they BOTH desire. A truly loving, committed BDSM relationship. Makes me hot and squirmy to read but still gives me a grown-up version of HEA. THANK YOU!!!

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