All Comments on 'Chains of Command Ch. 01'

Good start. Like the premise. Want to see where it goes...

What Grimlin said.

Hello, dear reader! Thanks for stopping by! If you like this story, you can find the rest of my work here on Amazon! https://www.amazon.com/-/e/B0759Y82BN

"Chains of Command" is meant to expand the universe of my Adventures of Avery Avedaan novels, in particular The Starlight Engine, which Fea plays a prominent role in and is featured on the cover of. While I tried to make "Chains" as accessible as possible without reading the book, it's events will be referenced in a few places. If you'd like a more complete understanding of Fea and who she is, please consider giving it a buy and a review! ^_^

Will this story be continued on Literotica indefinitely or is this more of a teaser for a work that will be released later on Amazon?

I definitely enjoyed the story, and it's evident that your worldbuilding is on point. You have so many unique xenos/aliens and great spins on classic sci-fi opera ideas. I like the honest nature of a character who is both constantly horny but also has ordinary worries and concerns (kind of like many people, go figure!). In your works on Amazon do you give much more background to the universe you've created or is it all "discover as you go"?

Overall, your writing style and story have intrigued me and provided satisfactory entertainment! I will definitely be checking out your Amazon. :)

To read here. Not quite enough to get from elsewhere though.

Next time tell the reader at the start that this is an add to buy the book. Save us from wasting time on part 1 of nothing.