All Comments on 'Challenge - Wife's View'

Of all the Literotica stories I've read over the years, this has got to be the best one. I liked the idea that the husband instigated the whole thing. Also, the events unfold with the wife telling the story. And at the end the husband mixes his own cum into her womb with the two young studs. How erotic this was. I hope there's a follow-up to this story.

Great writing building the tension. No secrets by the spouses just letting loose lust. This genre does not have enough of this kind of writing.

4*

Oh god oh god

In n out

Mmmm-mmmm

Oh god oh god

In n out

Mmmmm-mmmmm

Seems like you used these ohrases over n over as filler, story would have been just as good reducing the redundency of the phrases or minimizing them.

Great story. Nice build-up. Not too long and not too short. Well-written. Thanks for sharing. One of the best I've read in quite a while.

Classic ONE of the BEST of all TIME if not the BEST

What wife would not want two young studs to fuck with hubby's blessing.

10 Stars, I love slut wife stories where the hubby is involved. Cheers Col

there seduction game was boring, she was too easy. but it wasnt too bad.

She obviously is a special wife. Everyone won!

This is probably the best erotic short story I have ever read. Apart from it being a little drawn out in parts, it was a superb read.

It was believable and described feelings and emotions perfectly. The imagery was well developed and the story had just the right amount of drama.

Keep it up (Mwahaha!)

This is one of, if not the very best, stories I have read. Need a follow up with the guys coming back from college with some pot and a couple of friends.

This story keeps me wanting more. Please keep up the good work

outstanding! Would love to know what happens to Tiff? Great to finally hear a women point of view!

This pair of stories was sooo HOT! Well written and depicted from both points of view, though I will admit the voyeur in me enjoyed the husband's story, just slightly, more. I am definitely glad I stumbled across your library ... Thank you!

Really enjoyed the story. I would definitely enjoy hearing how things move on from here. :-)

Can you write a story where the husband and wife both fuck my wife, Lesa?

one of my favourites

Very well done, both versions. Hers should have included more information on the cocks - are they all "generous" as she says, and what does that mean? Variability adds to interest, so reader interest would increase with 3 different sizes, with 2 different configurations, 2 different ways to get oral from her, and more of her debriefing her husband. Whole different thing going on with both her and husband if one youth is bigger, one smaller than he, etc., how does she feel being fucked by the smaller after the larger, whichever mix, etc.

Bravo! Loved reading this the second time even more than the first.

Ok PrevertedMe. It has been 6 years since you wrote that story. We need a follow up. Tom said, "You know Chris and Jake will want us to sit them again". "I might ask Chris if he has another good mate that would like to stay over" Tiff said" Stop it Tom, Do you want to see get Gangbanged" Tom said "Yes and join in" That will be a 20 Star Story.

Great story, would love to see a continuation of it!!!

Hot!!!

Great story! Husband sparked it, gently blew until smoke appeared, fanned the flames and watched the fire glow into an inferno. Loved the woman's POV. It kept me hangong on wanting to see where she went. Watching the guys slowly experience an older woman's lust filled charms, was a bonus.!!!

Stories like this, make Literotica worth while! 5 STARS ++++. ... and a big thank you!!

Can you post the originals please. I liked the first ones you did better and I can’t find them anymore.

Great you found a real winner of a woman, your dick is going to rot off your body pal

Great story, love the husband vs wife perspective

Looking forward to more