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by EinfachToll

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story, need more.

Great story! Definitely want to see more chapters. A couple of spelling and grammar errors, but okay.

JDDRIVERJDDRIVERover 6 years ago

Really enjoyed this story. I think this one could go for many chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well done.

Very nice story, and with a lot of room to grow. I can't wait to eat the next chapters. Just a few grammar errors keeping you from perfection

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep writing!

Please don't leave this story unfinished, like so many other writers. Thank you. Please keep writing this series until it's finished.

pyramidqueenpyramidqueenover 6 years ago
Excellent

I look forward to the next chapter

EinfachTollEinfachTollover 6 years agoAuthor

There are already two more chapters released.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Way Over The Top

Your dialogue is about as cheesy and over-blown as I've ever seen. Keep up the good work, I'm enjoying it immensely.

realusmctazmanrealusmctazmanalmost 4 years ago
Wow

Just found this Great story. Man what a start! JT

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapter. But one thing. I didn't know that goddesses too wore panties. Lol. 😜

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